Wednesday, September 23, 2020

Play Dirty On Moral Grounds. Comments

Rating: 5.0

As a kid when playing football and rugby,
From the moment of kick-off my opponents,
Dearly loved to get in an early tackle,
Even when it was late.
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Shaun Cronick
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Dominic Windram 24 September 2020

Well said Shaun! We all know who this is, notwithstanding his many guises. I'm now wondering if mummy didn't provide him with enough attention when he was a wee nipper...ah diddums! Just pretend he doesn't exist...ignore him..remove every cowardly comment he ever makes from your page and keep writing your wonderful poems. That pernicious worm really isn't worth it. Anyway, it's a thump the old fool in the jaw inspired five from me!

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L Milton Hankins 23 September 2020

Very interesting way of expressing your disgust at the behavior of another person, but well-written and well-spoken! Thanks.

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Soran M. H 23 September 2020

part 1 Unfortunately, the world of poetry is a beautiful and spiritual world, in which there is no place for the bad, stingy and aggressive. In poetry it will extinguish the flames and heal the wounds instead of destroying life or hurting others,

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Soran M. H 23 September 2020

part 2 it seems that the pain has struck your pure heart, so you wrote a poetry to express what is inside. but never mind do not correct the mistake by mistake, we all like Shaun as an intellectual and a poet, this well penned poem deserves 5 stars..thanks for sharing, all the best.

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Soran M. H 23 September 2020

They would love to see the entire world burn and everyone in it. They would light a stick of dynamite at both ends to ensure it goes off.

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Soran M. H 23 September 2020

People fuelled by anger, And filled with petty jealousies.

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