Lampion in your heart
Evening moon far away
Landwinds blow aroma
From your singing practice
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A fantastic love poem in Reducing line format. Nicely written.10**
A vivid depiction of a special kind of love/ relationship. A great connection that could inspire passion. Well crafted with great images.
Resplendent diminished hexaverse. Very well penned. Beautifully expressed emotions compact in poetic version scintillating like north star. Beautiful contribution to poetic world.
This poem has that retro feel, I can hear the music and silent love blooming. Beautiful poem.5***
What else to do In such a poetic Situation, Other than love