Platonic Love Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Platonic Love

Rating: 4.8


Lampion in your heart
Evening moon far away
Landwinds blow aroma
From your singing practice
Titlark coming dancing
Outside rhythmic drizzling

After the rainbow
You threw the letter
And said- Tonight's gift
There I found life's hope
Starry night's greeting

Dark chocolate
Bitter coffee
gramophone songs
recital verse

Alone home
smiling plash
Time without

Carnal
Desire

Love



26.09.2020 Chattogram

Sunday, September 27, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
diminished hexaverse
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Suresh Kumar Ek 30 September 2020

What else to do In such a poetic Situation, Other than love

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M Asim Nehal 27 September 2020

A fantastic love poem in Reducing line format. Nicely written.10**

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 27 September 2020

A vivid depiction of a special kind of love/ relationship. A great connection that could inspire passion. Well crafted with great images.

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Varsha M 27 September 2020

Resplendent diminished hexaverse. Very well penned. Beautifully expressed emotions compact in poetic version scintillating like north star. Beautiful contribution to poetic world.

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Aarzoo Mehek 27 September 2020

This poem has that retro feel, I can hear the music and silent love blooming. Beautiful poem.5***

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