Sunday, May 4, 2014

Plato's Wall Comments

Rating: 3.5

You think you know reality
But that’s not true at all
What might be true, or not be true
Just shadows on the wall
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James Mazalic
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Colleen Courtney 05 May 2014

I actually like the last stanza of this piece. Brings just the right touch of humor.

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I like the rhythm of the poem but did not like the last stanza. I thought it did not go with the seriousness of the rest of the poem. Also, I did not understand why sometimes god and God were being used interchangeably.

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