In the wandering transparency
of the dazzling twilight
came across a star dancing
in the secrecy of the night
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This is like a celestial dialogue going on in the background of a streak of flashbacks. The narrative is flawless and the rhyming is perfect with a subtle music running through the poem. Hats off to you. Thank you, Mdm.
wandering transparency of the dazzling twilight conveys about entire wonderful imagery here. Interesting drafting shared with reality. Nice sharing.10