Saturday, January 9, 2016

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In the wandering transparency
of the dazzling twilight
came across a star dancing
in the secrecy of the night
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Asma Khan
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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 January 2016

wandering transparency of the dazzling twilight conveys about entire wonderful imagery here. Interesting drafting shared with reality. Nice sharing.10

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Rajnish Manga 09 January 2016

This is like a celestial dialogue going on in the background of a streak of flashbacks. The narrative is flawless and the rhyming is perfect with a subtle music running through the poem. Hats off to you. Thank you, Mdm.

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M Asim Nehal 09 January 2016

Superb poem, one of the best poem I read today.....10+

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