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I love your forthright emphasis on interiority. It is not something most people talk about and yet they are constantly having that interior conversation with their own Self which is what interiority is - in essence. If there is a practical value in writing and reading poems, it must be the way it guides, focuses, amplifies, enriches that interior life which would otherwise shrivel up from lack of stimulation. Another thing strikes me here: most people associate interiority with silence, but you explore it through sounds, music, partying - the real world which is raucous and LOUD. This attitude is going to reach more people than a sedate poem about the delights of SILENCE. They won't be able to dismiss poetry as irrelevant because you show them it is already part of their world too. (I blurred thr distinction between interiority and poetry in my comment, because they are so closely related in our minds,)

This crispy poem is a very artistic presentation of the dynamic architecture of the poet's inner vision. Thank you, RoseAnn. It was a joy to read.