An evening stroll along the path,
Venus rising from her daily bath
And just ahead an even lovelier sight,
Two moons arising in the pale moonlight,
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(cont.) .....She answered with a disengaging smile. ..............i love it . The space has been reserved there to this day! .......another laugh, but YOUR quotation mark at the end? to MyPoemList. hey, i think i said that already! [[ her 'cast' is upon my mantel, and SHE is upon my...]] bri ;)
A lady bending over in white pants. I introduced myself with one intent And following a very, very brief chat, Suggested that I'd like a plaster cast of that! ..........first part gave me a chuckle; last line, a laugh to MyPoemList! (to be continued) .....
I suppose it's a matter of opinion. Certainly an eyeful of shapeliness!
Venus rising from her daily bath Excellent imagery to describe the panorama of the nature at that hour. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
another favorite line: Two moons arising in the pale moonlight, :)