Wednesday, August 17, 2016

Plaster Work Comments

Rating: 2.8

An evening stroll along the path,
Venus rising from her daily bath
And just ahead an even lovelier sight,
Two moons arising in the pale moonlight,
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Tom Billsborough
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Bri Edwards 20 February 2018

another favorite line: Two moons arising in the pale moonlight, :)

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Bri Edwards 20 February 2018

(cont.) .....She answered with a disengaging smile. ..............i love it . The space has been reserved there to this day! .......another laugh, but YOUR quotation mark at the end? to MyPoemList. hey, i think i said that already! [[ her 'cast' is upon my mantel, and SHE is upon my...]] bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 20 February 2018

A lady bending over in white pants. I introduced myself with one intent And following a very, very brief chat, Suggested that I'd like a plaster cast of that! ..........first part gave me a chuckle; last line, a laugh to MyPoemList! (to be continued) .....

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 August 2016

Lovelier sight! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Tom Billsborough 17 August 2016

I suppose it's a matter of opinion. Certainly an eyeful of shapeliness!

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Ratnakar Mandlik 17 August 2016

Venus rising from her daily bath Excellent imagery to describe the panorama of the nature at that hour. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Tom Billsborough

Tom Billsborough

Preston Lancashire England
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