Planting The Saplings Comments

BesuBeaut poem with awesome diction.......

such a endearing piece, so calm and peaceful, magical indeed.. brilliant work sir

The equations are highly appreciable and have a perennial appeal. There is a spell working on it and it can amount a lot to each reader.

Enjoyed reading the piece, and the second stanza caught me eye, thank you for shring

So beautifully and intricately woven with nature as our teacher in life showing us we have to work to enjoy the fruits of our labour! Outstanding write! !

I think and even believe that life in youth age may yield a better and more beautiful and delicious a fruit than any a plant can give coz if you look and keep the duties of life like a sapling it yields more glorious a fruit of successes and fame that out of the pleasure it emits your whole life be full of happiness and pleasure.

This is an allegory.I love the central idea. Nature is the best teacher. Life imitates nature and art imitates life. Thus the concept of double imitation comes.Kudos brother!

You are able to transmit Serenity, Peace, Love of Nature totally at ease. Very nicely expressed.. I have never done Yoga, but I think the physical and mental feeling of relaxation and well being may be similar

A lovely poem, and an excellent use of metaphor.