Wednesday, August 17, 2011

Planted Comments

Rating: 2.8

in the mirror I see
what worry's done to me;
tears stain my face
until its beauty's abased.
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Stefanie Fontker 27 August 2011

I am not usually a fan of rhyming schemes, but yours do not bother me. Great writing, I like the flow of emotions in this one.

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