Wednesday, June 10, 2020

Plans For The Next Life Comments

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Making a plan for my next life,
Only love, there will be no strife,
She'll be my lovely husband,
I swear, I sincerely intend,
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 June 2020

What a wonderful limerick. Amazingly humorous. Yes, even in our next life we want to be with the one whom we loved so much. A romantic short write with a punch of humor. Brilliantly penned.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 10 June 2020

such a lovely plan do send me a blue print if you can I have studied so many lives O poet man I dare not different with thee all wives are at night time only lovely Rest you have told everyone all wives are similar excepton is none not one What a foolish husband

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