Sunday, December 17, 2017

Planet Of Snow Comments

Rating: 5.0

I have a story to tell
The story of a girl
A girl like snow
Who melts in your love
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Rini Shibu
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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 November 2022

The sun envies her beauty But she is always our sweety So soft like cotton candy Her smile makes all happy....lovely expression. A beautiful poem dear Rini. Top marks!

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Rebecca Navarre 23 December 2017

An Ever So Beautifully Painted! ! ! ! ! Heart Touching Poem! ! ! ! ! Filled With Beauty! ! ! ! ! Awe! ! ! ! ! And Heart Shown! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless 1OS! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Rini Shibu 25 December 2017

Thanks Rebecca..

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 19 December 2017

A lovely poem so highly metaphoric...poetry can be so delicately treated as a girl, a girl of snow. Loved the marvel of art through your pen, Rini. 10+++++ Subhas (From Sanjukta's laptop)

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Rini Shibu 20 December 2017

Thanks Subhas for reading and commenting

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Unnikrishnan E S 19 December 2017

Hi Rini, Lovely write. Using the metaphor of A girl like snow, you have portrayed a magnificent picture of the actual object of the poem: POETRY! Very skillfully done. Congrats. A 100+++

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Rini Shibu 19 December 2017

Thank you so much Unnikrishnan for reviewing

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Akhtar Jawad 18 December 2017

she is the words in poetry alive in the minds of you and me a great poem on poetry, loved it.

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Rini Shibu 18 December 2017

Thanks Akhtar..

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Lamar Cole 18 December 2017

This is a very wonderful poem to read about a girl who is like snow.

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Rini Shibu 18 December 2017

Thanks Lamar...

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 December 2017

Such a lovely write about poetry. It captures the wonders of having a creative mind..10

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Rini Shibu 18 December 2017

Thanks Rose for the comment

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