Plane Of Attainment Comments

I gave this poem 11 stars - because I'm pro-contraception and I enjoyed the nap.

Does the boldness of contraception in literati ethos stem from the fact that talking about that puts the girl to sleep?

Was 'plane of attainment' another typo? Maybe you meant to say 'plane old attainment' - which is what we get from Amazon.

Were you implying, by using trans-subjective force, that transexual individuals can use ‘the force'?

'swells of cranial sap' - was that a typo? Did you mean to say ‘carnal sap'?

You use of a reductionist perspective, in regards your readers, implying they are complex and dynamic is inherently flawed.

While I didn't understand it (you're too literate and deep for me) but the reference to 'invisible gimbals and gyroscopes, ' can only represent a complex toy and the user's intentions.