Plain Tears With A Rented Life Comments

Hey, Mr. Caliolio. I like this style of poetry. I kinda use it in one of mine called '(See How Cynical I am?) ' I got a little confused in this one, though, 'cause of the lack of correct punctuation. Maybes that's intentional, like E. E. Cummings, I don't know. But I would understand it better if there was punctuation, yeah. Or maybe I'm not meant to understand it. Wow, okay, I'm sorry, I gotta go to bed. Didn't mean to offend, if I did. Keep enjoying yourself, Dan.