Dead dog dead dog
Guts all down the freeway
in a dirty red streak
fur all mangled lookin
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I love the rhythm on this one, I can almost hear a raspy voiced musician singing this. Great poem Smack!
Thank ya'll for yer kinds words I'll keep writing and loading them up on the computer whenever I can
Dirty red streak fur... Smacked my medulla. Now we are talking words with strength and meaning. Poignant poem!
Great poem! Love the originality and descriptiveness!