Friday, April 17, 2009

Places In The Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

Going through my favorite memories
Looking in my heart, thats where they'll be
The look on your face, when I gave you a ring
Means more to me than almost anything
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james d nall,jr
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Greenwolfe 1962 24 April 2009

This is really a kind of story poem. And I love those. This one gave me a lot of pleasure to read. I love clarity and sentiment and this poem has both. I can really find nothing wrong with it at all. I may have hasd some diferent rhymes and proceeded differently, but you did a wonderful job and I have no complaints at all. GW62

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james d nall,jr

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blackshear, georgia
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