Wednesday, July 18, 2012

Places I Have Been Comments

Rating: 5.0

he sat outside the grocery store,
Watching the world go by.
If he was eighty, he was ninety four,
With a big ole smile toothless and sly.
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Juan Olivarez
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Joseph Anderson 13 August 2012

I ain't quite there yet, but can appreciate that old codgers attitude. A real fun write that has me chuckling as I write- gotto give this a 10

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Smoky Hoss 18 July 2012

Sounds like he truly was one of the good-guys; and this truly is one of the good-poems. Great story telling here Juan.

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