Places And Men Comments

Nicely written sonnet With good rhyme and rhythm. Sylva

The inner sweet of life; and put in word A personal force that doth not pass away. I love these lines. Its a wonderful poem

Do men shape their land or does the land shape the men? Goodwood and Arundel possess their lords, Successive in the towers and groves, which stay; These two poor men, by some right of their own, Possessed the earth and sea, the sun and moon, The inner sweet of life; and put in words A personal force that doth not pass away.

liked it... Thanks for sharing

Nicely written.The inner sweet of life; and put in words A personal force that doth not pass away.

Thanks for sharing. Nice work with the muse of nature.

Excellent poem with beautiful diction. Enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing.