Wednesday, June 26, 2013

Place Of Joy Comments

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A glistening gray path,
encased on both sides
by emerald green grass.
Golden as the sun, leaves over my head,
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Katherine Bryce
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Khairul Ahsan 30 July 2013

A nice poem. Good to know you are heading for a place of joy: a place of freedom; a place of love; a place of a new beginning; the true desires of my heart will meet me there, in that place of 'joy'. So nice!

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Katherine Bryce 27 June 2013

Thank you very much! I tried my best to paint a visual for this piece. In this one, the visual aspect is everything, so I'm glad it really connected with you :)

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Gajanan Mishra 26 June 2013

place of freedom, place of love, this earth, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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