Friday, July 26, 2013

Place Of Dignity Comments

Rating: 4.5

Eyes of gold will seek what troubles the meek
Those in the valley aspire to the peak
It’s hard to get there with these weights on my feet
I’ve been running forever on this hopeless street
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Nick Kasparie 26 July 2013

Thanks Khairul! I appreciate the feedback, and I added a note to help clarify. It IS a bit ambiguous isn't it?

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Dave Walker 26 July 2013

A great poem, like it, a great write.

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Khairul Ahsan 26 July 2013

A nice poem with good rhyme and rhythm. A short note at the end (Poet's Note) would have helped to grasp it better.

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Nick Kasparie

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