Pity When You Tore My Heart Comments

Very few poems have made me think, and I mean really THINK, such as this one right here. I can't even explain it yet, as I'm still processing this poem... what is pity? Who has the right to pity who? Who in this world has the leverage and superiority over another being without it being self-proclaimed? Easy 10...

The mask on this so called 'Heart' Stays there strong until someone ELSE tear. Only then we realise and look beyond. A basic truth here as to... When do we look beyond. That which is beyond Shows the real life within oneself. Its a worth experience Enables the self to come out of that self built empire While you pity on... At the same time, can be grateful to that experience. Good one...Very meanigful expression in each line. Thank you

This poem calls upon the reader too to do some serious introspection...another great poem Rani

this poem is a mental purge.....

This tears at our heart too Rani - -and you have brought out the most pitiable conditions which we can see when we look - - - a first class verse.... a 10 + + from Fay....

A realistic take on life as it is today..so many do indeed see things through opaque eyes.