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The temple siren calls, deep within his walls,
stirring in his isolation, a need for expression and creation.
Reaching for notelets, grabbing at memorets and pigeon holes,
his hands slide and his memory glides,
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This knocked my socks off. I'll bet there isn't a single person on this site who couldn't relate to this one. The last stanza in particular is brilliant. t x
I am glad you have again answered the temple siren's call. Your poems have both sweetly coated and uncoated the pill of say for me. Poems sometimes seem always a work-in-progress for the poet - -'not even close, \to those he meant.' Keep picking up and re-dipping your pen for your readers. Tom
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7/27/2025 3:24:29 AM # 1.0.0
Eloquently penned with a wonderful flow and control of pace...the opening line grabbed me and I was hooked from the first to the last line...your words certainly resonated with me... j.