Saturday, August 3, 2013

Pitied Cracked Dolls.....For The Love Of G Comments

Rating: 4.5

A heart lays wrenched and lost
Swirled in brash black waves
Such a pity
Such a crime to our lives
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Saadat Tahir 05 August 2013

soulful and despair laden lines.... done with deep anguish that seeps through and is so moving liked

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Danny Draper 04 August 2013

A forcefully sad piece that greater than its darkness is memory of love, understanding, acceptance and sanctuary. So often these flickering lights are ephemeral and yet promise great resilience and longevity, such is life. But know the experiences of care and nurturing and love is to know a seed of difference and lighted positive purpose. While the characters perished from life broken and damaged together they both exited and in that act perhaps delivered into a greater union.

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