Friday, November 11, 2005

Piss In The Face Of Destiny Comments

Rating: 4.4

Cloaked in disguises
In the alley of thieves,
I’m violently tested and seeking reprieves
From tortuous days
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Uriah Hamilton
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Dee Daffodil 05 March 2007

I enjoyed this one very much Uriah! ! Hugs, Dee

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Theorem Thetruthserum 11 November 2005

Very cool...very truthful and real. Great write.

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 11 November 2005

Unbelievable! ! ! Uriah you wrote this so well...I felt everything! ! !

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Damn, Boy! You are on fire today!

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Raynette Eitel 11 November 2005

Uriah, there was never a doubt that you controlled this poem. You stayed within the parameters you had set and didn't waver. Nice write. Raynette

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Marcy Jarvis 11 November 2005

I always like it when Luna resurfaces.

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Stuart Mason 11 November 2005

I love Baudelaire. Some curious content here and i like this hazy reality that you've created.

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Mary Nagy 11 November 2005

There's just something so dangerously romantic about pirates! Great poem Uriah! Sincerely, Mary

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Kelly Allen Vinal 11 November 2005

What a masterful juxtaposition of theme and meter! Excellent!

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Max Reif 11 November 2005

Loud and clear, Uriah, if painful!

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