Saturday, January 26, 2013

Pirate Captain Comments

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Knifelike shoals comb the reefs of fate
intriguing as the foam waves mate
intertwined in voiceless keys
roundelays of vestal seas.
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Captain Cur
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Ken E Hall 27 June 2013

I have spent a month on the Queen Mary and you would be perfect to be the Pirate Captain with your gang plank in the pools they have dunking the rich, I, d sign up! ...regards

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Heather Wilkins 19 June 2013

excellent poem. nice imagery.

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Valsa George 16 April 2013

So you want to sail away to the lure of the Seas with a companion where knife like shoals comb the reefs and foam waves mate! Enjoyed the beautiful images all through the poem! !

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Shahzia Batool 27 January 2013

Who will say NO Captain? your readers will be happy in being your prisoners in the voyage! ! ! thanks for the word NEW in red! ! !

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