Saturday, March 23, 2019

Pioneer Of The Earth Comments

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My heart melt with frozen lie
When I say,
I'm the pioneer of the earth
Disgusting facts of what about
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Ratnakar Mandlik 23 March 2019

Not withstanding to fact assigned I resume to my daily work" Great and rational concluding lines as also the flight of imagery in the beginning. Thanks for sharing.10 points. Regards. Ratnakar Mandlik.

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Ramesh Rai 25 March 2019

Thank you so much for your beautiful comment. Much appreciated. Regards

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 March 2019

You are the the pioneer of Earth. Perhaps song of Nightingale is enchanting with sweet melody to expel grief and bring happiness. Resuming to daily work signed is definite an interesting habit. This poem is very beautifully and excellently penned. Thank you very much for sharing this poem with us....10

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Lorraine Colon 23 March 2019

Perhaps you are not a pioneer, but you, and all of us, are caretakers of this Earth. The well-being of Earth and all it contains has been assigned to us. That is quite a responsibility and should be regarded with pride and honor and done to the best of our ability. So take heart, and don't feel bad about not being a pioneer. Good ideas are expressed in your poem.

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Ramesh Rai 25 March 2019

Thank you so much for your beautiful comment. Much appreciated. Best wishes.

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