Friday, August 25, 2006

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I expect my eternity
To be staggering in the rain
In a desolate city
Where soulless women
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Uriah Hamilton
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 25 August 2006

Riveting expression, though I beckon to disagree with this anti-Christ philosophy.However, as writers, thank God, or whoever you want to thank, that we live in countries that have no true perameters for our craft.This is a well written piece, Uiah''''''''''''''''''''''''fjrI

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Sandra Fowler 25 August 2006

Very eloquent, but also very sad. Exceptional poem, Uriah. Kind regards, Sandra

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