Saturday, June 2, 2012

Pinkish Teens Comments

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Little little peals of pink
peel of my petty wander to savour sunshine de novo!
Of teeming pink,
i deem par greens under blues, the alter ego in spirits being in altar!
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swetha vankayalapati
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Captain Cur 17 July 2012

Loved the flow and liquity of this poem, especially liked the second to the last line.

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Oludipe Oyin Samuel 13 July 2012

the rhythm poses delicious. A beautiful write, Swetha. You're indeed a witty poet

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The sincere flow of words, strives to signify in every line, and the rhythm sounds so marvel to read and digest. Wonderful write, as usual The_African_Son (Th³_ªfR¹cª¬_šºN)

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Sharad Juneja 08 June 2012

Wow I really love ur creativity..u try to think everything from a different n ur own view..beautiful

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Shihabudheen K J 03 June 2012

A treatise on pink.nice

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