Tuesday, July 3, 2018

Pink Seashell Comments

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He dreamed that they lived in a pink seashell.
And everything was so swell.
Until a player came along and stole his girl.
And then he had lost his precious pearl.
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Lamar Cole
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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 July 2018

A highly imaginative poem so touchingly expressed. Though it is a dream yet it gives feeling real. Beautiful poem.

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Rini Philip 04 July 2018

He should learn to guard his place from thieves or the petals will drain

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Rini Shibu 04 July 2018

Pearl will drain

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Robert Murray Smith 03 July 2018

An imaginative poem Lamar. ++10 Robert

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