Pink Ribbons Comments
Pink ribbons span the evening sky
And trim your feathered bed
Now I will sing a lullaby
Lay down your sleepy head
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Good work. Try to add more distinction between first two lines so they do not seem to repeat the thought. cheers, WFD
Simply elegant...you have a good feel for flow and poetry suits you...keep writing, I'll shall keep reading...
Val D...the name is suffice......beautiful was the first word which erupted from my mouth............
Softness calm all pain and it vibrates from your soul, i love it.serenity flutes in your words free the soul! _Unwritten Soul
As usual I am left speechless by your talent Val. wonderful poem.
Beautiful imagery and words, another masterpiece from a brilliant poet.
Oh, fantastic! I like this poem and it is so nice and beautiful!
That one was great Val. I liked the metaphor of the Universal Child. Oh no! Pirate girl was so touched she is dyeing all my sails pink. How will I ever live it down!
Just beautiful Val, I was singing that lullaby as I read it, really enjoyable.
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7/23/2025 4:52:23 PM # 1.0.0
Val you are a great writer and I love reading your poems. Beautiful poem indeed :)