Friday, October 2, 2009

Pink-Ribbon Blues Comments

Rating: 4.1

Palpated her breast, a lump in the throat.
The monster that mama and aunty smote.

Toyed with the pages of a letter she wrote,
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saadat tahir
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Ritty Patnaik 14 October 2009

dear saadat.....it is a sad touching poem, written with a lot of feelings.serious one.....coming from a doctor! god bless you ritty

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Rafique Farooqi 14 October 2009

A sad and informative poem.....tender and devoted write.....10+++++++

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Ejaz Khan 12 October 2009

An important write about a terrible disease, it's nice to increase the consciousness and understanding for the victims, very well penned!

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Sahar Sahar 11 October 2009

CA breast is usually diagnosed late in your country......may be at 3ed stage....with little prognosis.....massive surgical and radiotherapy, and huge chemotherapy......i am not a doc but i know, about all this, it means the level of awareness in our social life. Well penned......  doc.......be careful when palpating.....

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sad poem, god poetry.. one day no more shall feel pain. one glorious day

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Sonya Florentino 08 October 2009

this is a powerful poem Saadat....about what a woman undergoes with this disease...and all the more touching because it was written by a male who can empathise and understand....

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Mamta Agarwal 06 October 2009

Saadat, this is so moving; you have so graphically captured the emotional turmoil, physical mutilation, indignities suffered and the helpless ness of one devastated by this killer, and then the ultimate rejection. love and warmth do more than medicines. Mamta

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Abdul Athani 05 October 2009

all i can say that your poem is nice i read without missing a word,

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Asma Khan 04 October 2009

Very well written with good diction.

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Indira Babbellapati 02 October 2009

doc...right from first line i knew wht i was heading to...thnq for the concern!

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