Thursday, May 24, 2007

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I’m a restless and corrupted one
Hoping for eternal darkness
And an end to they bright shining sun
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Daniel Richards
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Kevin Patrick 22 April 2013

This is a lovely poem, but I could no help but notice several of your lines are vaguely rewrtten versions of the lyrics to Pink Floyds Learning to Fly. Still a good read

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Stephen Magill 03 June 2009

wow, poetry is poetencey, a great poem to add to your collection of great poems. steve

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