Thursday, July 10, 2014

Pink Pyjama Party? Comments

Rating: 4.8

Now what would you think,
Of a party all pink,
With pink iguanas,
Dressed in pink pyjamas?
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Stephen Katona
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Bri Edwards 12 November 2016

if i were the mouse or frog, i would take a few steps AWAY FROM the larger beasts! bri :)

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Ruth Walters 01 June 2015

I love this poem.......great stuff.

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Ruth Walters 01 June 2015

I just love this poem and the explanation above. Great stuff!

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Valsa George 29 April 2015

Your knowledge of animals is just amazing Stephen! Through this interesting poem, you have affirmed the fact that colour is only skin deep! The real worth lies somewhere deeper and we should have eyes to see it. Entertaining and edifying! Thanks!

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Stephen Katona 29 April 2015

Thank you Valsa. You've inspired me to upload one of the cartoons that go with this poem. I started off wanting to write a poem about an albino dolphin that looks pink and wondered if there were any other weird bright pink creatures in the world. After writing the first verse I did not like what I had created and felt compelled to write the second verse. It's strange how poems sometimes just evolve into something more powerful and worthy than originally intended.

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Bri Edwards 11 April 2015

J. Nash shares some good words, below. i like the rhyming, the story, and the human philosophy? ANY color of ink, be it blue or pink, can be good or bad, I think you know; ....... I'm glad. To MyPoemList, for its humanitarian leaning. bri :)

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Heather Wilkins 17 October 2014

a nice pink animal party a party for all would be a ball

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Susy Evelyne 21 July 2014

I agree with Jacqueline and Pradip - you draw on your amazing knowledge of animals to show us how wonderful life could be. This pink party would be fab & please invite me! Favourite lines: shallow/marshmallow!

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 11 July 2014

you write such lovely episodes about our more humane friends.

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Lorraine Colon 11 July 2014

Nature never ceases to amaze. And your poems are amazing.... so enchanting.

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