Wednesday, August 5, 2020

Pink Promises Comments

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Where are your promises gone?
Those pink promises made in the twilight
Of our tryst under a half moon
Under the Peepal in front of your hostel
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Saroj Padhi
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Deluke Muwanigwa 05 August 2020

Beautiful love poem. I reckon if you were to inter pace with a a chorus this could become a singable hit song. I miss you so To every other man i say no You came so strong You ve gone so long Want you to know I miss you so Something like that for a chorus. Great stuff.

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