Thursday, April 13, 2006

Pink Little Comb Comments

Rating: 5.0

There's this similarity with all the girls,
They want perfection in 2 things to unfurl.
First a set of 32 sparkling pearls
& secondly the ever so important manageable curls.
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Catastrophe King 19 August 2006

I was wondering... why did anyone not vote for this one? ? This one is truly hilarious. Preeti, you write like an angel. It needs a very special talent to pen down a comical situation in the poem format.. and you have done that with so much ease - that reflects the immense talent that you have within you. The narration was just so perfect... the way you have lined up or built up the situations.... astounding. STANDING OVATION! !

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THE WIT DOTH TOPPLE ME SENSE OF HUMOR MUCH, LASSIE... GREAT WRITE...YOUR POETIC DIVERSITY IS AMAZING FOR SUCH AYOUNG LADY...THE WORLD SHALL BE YOURS ONE DAY, , , (LITERARILLY SPEAKING ''''''''''''''FRANK)

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Con Nie 13 April 2006

Cute poem. I enjoyed reading it. Sincerely, Connie Webb

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