Monday, October 27, 2008

Pink Confused A White Rose Red Comments

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Pink confused a red rose white
Dipping sun leads day to night.
Guileless dawn joins light with dark;
Hateless, awe-filled, works of art.
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Sailing to windward
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David Beckham 25 August 2011

the meter is very well constructed. very flirtatious poem, really enjoyed! keep writting.10/10

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Scarlett Treat 27 October 2008

I really liked this one....an interesting choice of white to red and red to white! I think it is very well done...short, to the point?

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Sailing to windward

Sailing to windward

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