Sunday, February 17, 2019

Pining For His Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

She wanted his love to be the same
she thought their love
was more than a game
She held his hand covered by a glove
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Aqua Flower
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M Asim Nehal 28 February 2019

The metaphor took it to a different level, love is free flowing but here it is a restricted love.10++

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Rebecca Navarre 19 February 2019

Deeply beautiful heart, that shows in each word and part! .. Beautifully expressed! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing! .. Ever so very many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ...................+++++

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Carl Roussell 17 February 2019

The line, 'she held his hand covered by a glove' seems to say she can only be so close, his heart is covered. A well written poem.

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Aqua Flower 18 February 2019

Thank you for reading and yes, I liked this line too! I wanted to present the visual of love that can only go so far.

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