Thursday, November 26, 2015

Pine Trees And Maple Leaves Comments

Rating: 5.0

Like a tree our love grows, live oaks of yesterday's passion.
Left blinded and crooked, as the wind pierces through feeble mossy canopies.
Laughter and chaos, attracted like angry magnets these borders won't hold.
I'm ever bronzing, this equator knows not shame of lust.
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Souren Mondal 28 November 2015

'Left blinded and crooked, as the wind pierces through feeble mossy canopies. Laughter and chaos, attracted like angry magnets these borders won't hold.' Beautiful lines Blaine. Your reference to Pheonix alongside an airplane is really well constructed and it blends the mythical bird with the 'mechanical bird'. A very well conceived and crafted poem on love. Thanks for sharing mate :)

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Blaine Strong 28 November 2015

Thank you so much! Encouragement from all my peers is what keeps me going

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Shah Surja 26 November 2015

Ah.... beautiful poem

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Blaine Strong 26 November 2015

Aww thank you kindly!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 November 2015

Love carries in to bright light is amazing definitely in this sharing. Wisely penned poem shared here. Nice.10

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Blaine Strong 26 November 2015

Thank you so much!

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