Like a tree our love grows, live oaks of yesterday's passion.
Left blinded and crooked, as the wind pierces through feeble mossy canopies.
Laughter and chaos, attracted like angry magnets these borders won't hold.
I'm ever bronzing, this equator knows not shame of lust.
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Love carries in to bright light is amazing definitely in this sharing. Wisely penned poem shared here. Nice.10
'Left blinded and crooked, as the wind pierces through feeble mossy canopies. Laughter and chaos, attracted like angry magnets these borders won't hold.' Beautiful lines Blaine. Your reference to Pheonix alongside an airplane is really well constructed and it blends the mythical bird with the 'mechanical bird'. A very well conceived and crafted poem on love. Thanks for sharing mate :)
Thank you so much! Encouragement from all my peers is what keeps me going