Pindar (Urdu) Comments

Why should I say: Few words is in need and your lips must keep a lovely smile, That dew drips on my soul's Rose /Why should I say to you: This cant be spelled by me! Lovely (Dard bhi hai, dawa bhi hai,) I can't write like this really

bahot khub.each n every words are like gem.shazia is a grt poetess she will definitely help u better.

Shukriya Jasmeen, aap ki acknowledgement k lye, lekin asal me aap k andar urdu poet mojood hay, aur aap ki poem boht acchhi he...your writing is very strong!

Mujh se yahi keha to nehi jata! ab bin tere raha nhe jata..........nothing need to be changed, poignant poem embellished with the emotive color of love.deserve more than 10..