Tuesday, September 13, 2011

Pills Comments

Rating: 5.0

My life is being drain
After taking all these hits
Each time I can’t see straight
I wonder to myself “Am I okay?
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David Longoria
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Liliana Roman 16 March 2012

this is a beutiful poem. it is so sad but it was so blunt that i felt the words. i felt the longing and the pain. good write.

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(De Va) 09 November 2011

how sad you message, how great your talent, how simple words can reach out and touch the souls of others.....hugs n blessings...... Surrounding you with loving and healing blessings...

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*BleedingHeart* *Arielle* 21 October 2011

wow ths is amazing great job ik how it feels

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Makenzi Betts 04 October 2011

love it.... keeeeep writing. your great at it<3

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