Tuesday, December 18, 2007

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take these she said..
i wanted to cry...
but without these pills,
i'd probably die? ?
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I wish i was as invisable as he made me feel
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perfect everglade 06 February 2008

hey! yea that was really good! i understand what you feel. they put me on them and i got really mad, but hey its all good now cause if you do get on the right ones you will like them, how crazy that sounds: }

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Red Blooded Black Hearted 18 December 2007

Aaww, I'm so sorry they've got you on pills Kaila. I hope u get betta soon and remember that if u need I'm here for a friendly talk... Beautiful poem though. It's a sad story but something in there is strong... Keep writing Luv Rissa: -)

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Suicide King 18 December 2007

very creative ending...

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Sara Lecheminant 18 December 2007

Wow I liked that poem! sounds great and had a very strong feeling. keep writing: D

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