Monday, August 24, 2009

Pilgrims Of The Soul* Comments

Rating: 5.0

Pilgrims of the soul

Poets' journey through body to soul,
It has no scope for a double role;
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C. P. Sharma
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Patrick A. Martin 07 September 2009

A ship has many crew members but they all have one duty the welbeing of the ship. I like this poem very much and it's a pleasure to sail through life sharing the journey with you Sharma Ji.10

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Vaibhav Pandey 06 September 2009

This is indeed a remarkable poem sir.....the best tribute to the PH family...10

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Alison Cassidy 05 September 2009

Your express the 'essence' of our PoemHunter family poetically and insightfully in this fascinating poem. Your final couplet is particularly eloquent. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sarwar Chowdhury 03 September 2009

great......remarkable poem! fine wording! enlightening verses! 10+

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 02 September 2009

profound verses...a fantastic platform ph has provided us..hope the world could be so

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Mamta Agarwal 31 August 2009

poet; s journey through body to soul, it has no scope for a dopuble role Sir, i have never come across such profound words a lovely, inspiring, uplifting poem all of us at PH are a community, in one soul our bodies roll. amazing composition. Mamta

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Ben Gieske 31 August 2009

Yes, it is nice to share our joys and sorrows, our cares and desires together here on PH. Thanks to all that have connected with me and those I have been able to touch in some meaningful way. A journey to me means something longer than a trip which we can take alone. But a journey, while sometimes we must walk alone, implies mingling with many others on the same path and which we cannot complete alone without other's help.

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Linda Moore 29 August 2009

Very well said and true.....10

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Howard Kern 28 August 2009

I must agree the journey is so much more than the out come. A place where we all try and meet on level ground that starts with a blank page, and try to connect to others! 10

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Obed Souza 27 August 2009

Wonderful! Our souls find rests only in the love of God... It is trapped in the cage of existence, awaiting for the fresh air of eternity... 10!

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Lynda Robson 27 August 2009

I like the expression 'in one soul, our bodies roll' well composed 10 Lynda xx

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Sandra Fowler 24 August 2009

What a wonderful response to Meggie's poem. Your conclusion is inspired indeed. 10/10. Friends at poemhunter, Sandra

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Ramesh T A 24 August 2009

This journey of the pilgrims is sure to spiritual bliss! Nice!

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