Pilgrims Comments

Louise- your poem has much meaning.We seem to spend so much of our lives on distractions and forget what really moves us. We do have something very beautiful to observe in life and yes it is god. When we take down our barriers and face each other heart to heart it hurts us.What a risk.But the risk is worth it.Without this we cannot see each other it is like walking through deep fog at night trying hard to distinquish the shapes of peoples intentions. I think that you have alot of positve expression and your poem has turned yet another nessicery light on.Beautiful simplistic but above all very worthy. Please don't stop writing brilliant! Poems... the world needs them more then it asks.