Tuesday, March 5, 2013

Pilgrimage Comments

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Wayward, worn-out on paths of life
Laden steps, eyes seeking bliss
Tread the souls, weary of woes and strife
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Yasmin Khan
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Shahzia Batool 08 April 2013

If led on a right path then journey of life becomes a pilgrimage otherwise a weary journey...

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Valerie Dohren 02 April 2013

Excellent write - great depiction of lifes journey.

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Hazel Durham 09 March 2013

Great description with beautiful imagery and lines, expertly crafted!

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Yasmin Khan

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