Tuesday, December 15, 2009

Pilgrimage Comments

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I am the culture of every soul.
I was there at the birth of mans first dream.
Voices, plagues and language,
tears wet and dry
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Javier Zamorano
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masked lady 28 December 2009

Nice poem! I agree with carol, as i read your poem, i begin painting in my mind. Your poem not only touches the heart, it makes the mind work too. Thanks for sharing.

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carol saffen 16 December 2009

Love your poetry -As I read your poems- your words shape many senses-while your poems evoke an array of emotions they also- just as paintbrushes shape a picture-your words.shape a visual as well - the essence of a soft watercolor hue takes shape- as you bring poetry from 'reading' to 'seeing' Yes! I see poetry. Thank you for sharing cs

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Javier Zamorano

Javier Zamorano

Culver City, California
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