Wednesday, June 27, 2018

Pilgrim Spirit- Basking In Her Beautiful Smile Comments

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I wake up to the splendid fountain of colors,
Deep within steady breaths, fervent to find
Its braided channel, down my starved vision
To pride her radiant smile -my wonderland!
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Dr Antony Theodore 30 August 2020

time holding your hand- With my pilgrim spirit-basking in your smile -glory; Unabashed-reflects in playing gentle lips, hail- Sitting by streams-in sizzling summer blues- weary! ohhhhhhhh this is a wonderful poem. really love's journey is a pilgrim journey. beauty, love, wishes, faithfulness, dedication. care, concern. love and life all are qualities of a pilgrim of love. you have mastered it here dear poet. congrats! ! i recommend this poem as the poem of the Day. tony

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Kee Thampi 30 June 2018

I move in frantic steps, beats unfurled-Wind; With moisten eyes- in tune to windy space Captured in immortal frames, I hold dearest- beauty of smile in words

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The Peaceful One 27 June 2018

We will watch for you. Loved one

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