Tuesday, October 17, 2017

Pilgrim's Doubt Comments

Rating: 4.0

'Will there be pity or mercy for my soul,
Will there be the rays ov gold at the pearly gates,
Or is there nothing, nothing after all,
That can save me from the hostility ov space.
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Chris Noir
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George Krokos 17 October 2017

It's right to express doubt at times when there seems to be no answer to a prayer. Though you may have been given the answer and not seen or recognised it. God is never really silent and is also omnipresent. We have to learn how to contact Him within our own soul. No matter where you are keep calling out to Him within your mind and heart sincerely with love and He will respond.

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Chris Noir 17 October 2017

I appreciate the point of view, but please note that all of my poems that have narration or tell a story are there to present a perspective and not express factual statements of reality, I am an agnostic and am open to any argument that you bring forth and I appreciate you taking time to read and rate my poem.Thank you very much sir.

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