Friday, January 29, 2010

Pigments Of Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

My eyes
Were glazed over before,
All veins
Have the gelid water
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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE
COMMENTS
Gillena Cox 04 February 2010

interesting metapho; you certainly have a way with words; had to loo up 'gelid' new to me :)

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Sandra Fowler 03 February 2010

Exceptional, my friend. The true poet always gives himself away in words. Blessings from, Sandra

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A thousand coats of paint could not hide the beauty of this poem. Well done my friend.

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Beauty Philosophy 02 February 2010

A good reflection on the pigments of love.

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Rebecca Walters 30 January 2010

Well, I must say that I think this is a wonderful piece of poetry

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Tsira Goge 30 January 2010

I liked too this a poem, especially its original ending, Amir..10... Kindest regards, Tsira

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Emma Adamyan 29 January 2010

yes i liked, but nothing can cover pigments of true love. ur 10

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