My eyes
Were glazed over before,
All veins
Have the gelid water
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Exceptional, my friend. The true poet always gives himself away in words. Blessings from, Sandra
A thousand coats of paint could not hide the beauty of this poem. Well done my friend.
Well, I must say that I think this is a wonderful piece of poetry
I liked too this a poem, especially its original ending, Amir..10... Kindest regards, Tsira
yes i liked, but nothing can cover pigments of true love. ur 10
interesting metapho; you certainly have a way with words; had to loo up 'gelid' new to me :)