Why there are so many crippled, walking and limping on the yard?
Why are their joints ripped off, missing one in the middle?
How is she lost half of her leg, balancing as a ballerina?
Did he step on the mine's head, in the battle field of Afghan?
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Your lines on the pigeons and their fate draw the reader's sympathy, VS....And that's a very effective ending indeed with May God save the Queen and her subjects, including these limping hungry birds.