Sunday, February 28, 2016

Piercing Eyes (Pt.4) Comments

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She doesn't know how to overcome.
She just watches her own life,
slip away into the past.
The children made her ride their voyages,
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Rebecca Springsteen
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Dr Antony Theodore 28 February 2016

She doesn't know how to overcome. She just watches her own life, slip away into the past. loneliness portrayed well wounded eyes.. thank you. tony

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Rebecca Springsteen 28 February 2016

Thanks, for totally understanding this poem. It'll make even more sense if you read the other three parts.

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