Tuesday, November 24, 2009

Pied – R.I.P. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Pied appeared one day late spring
With damaged crown, a gracious king,
Regal in the way he stood
White bib and pants, jet black hood
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Scarborough Gypsy
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Robert E Hann 24 November 2009

The first of yours that I have read. Your charming tale is quite well said. I felt the sadness and dismay when Pied took leave and flew away. Robert

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Herbert Nehrlich2 24 November 2009

Very sweet poem to go with a melancholy sip of a South Australian Shiraz. Well done and I wish you would post more. Best, H

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